ORIGINAL SENTENCES redundancy italized |
EXPLANATION |
Redundancy |
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can be divided |
[periphrasis of 'comprises'] |
into three categories. |
[tautology, we can count] |
Firstly there is |
[tautology, we can count and of course it exists otherwise we could not count it] |
simple repetition.
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Secondly there is |
[tautology, as above] |
periphrasis, |
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and thirdly |
[tautology, we can count] |
tautology. |
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The first of these, simple repetition, |
[simple repetition] |
is the recurrence or reiteration of words, phrases or even, in some cases, of whole sentences. |
[tautology, what else could it be?] |
By periphrasis |
[simple repetition] |
we mean the use of many words to express an idea which could, in fact, be expressed by using fewer words. |
[tautology, we do this because that is what the dictionary says periphrasis means] |
We can see what exactly this means most clearly if we look at |
[tautology] |
an example |
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of periphrasis: the periphrastic |
[simple repetition] |
phrase |
[tautology] |
" the people of America" |
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could be replaced by |
[periphrasis of 'for'] |
the single word |
[tautology] |
"Americans". |
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Tautology |
[simple repetition] |
is the use of words or phrases whose meaning has already been conveyed by other words. |
[tautology, we know or if we don't we can look it up in a dictionary] |
To give just one |
[tautology] |
example |
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of tautology, |
[simple repetition] |
it might be useful to consider the expression |
[tautology] |
"parents who have children" |
[periphrasis of 'parents with children'] |
in which the phrase |
[tautology] |
"who have children" |
[simple repetition] |
is redundant as its meaning has already been conveyed by the use of the noun "parents". |
[tautology] |
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